大学英语六级改错部分20篇(二)

第三篇： Error Correction

The key to being a winner is to have desire

and a goal from which you refuse to be deterred .

That desire fuels your dreams and the

special goal keeps you focusing. --71.

Deeply down we all have a hope that our --72.

destiny is not to be average and prosaic. Everyone

talks about a good game， but the winner goes out

and do something. To win， there has to be movement --73.

and physical action. Attitudes and persistence can

help us become who we want to be. --74.

Competition is the best motivator. Because --75.

many people use competition as an excuse for not

doing something， those who really want to success --76.

see competition as an opportunity， and they‘re

willing to do the tough work necessarily to win. --77.

Learn to deal with fear. Fear is the greatest

deterrent to taking risk. People worry so much --78.

about failing that their fear paralyzes them，

drained the energy they might otherwise be using to --79.

grow.

You can cultivate self-respect by developing a

commitment to your own talents. It may be

necessary to do the thing you fear the most in

order to put that fear in rest， so that it can no --80.

longer control you.

答案：

71. focused

72. Deep

73. does

74. what

75. While/Although

76. succeed

77. necessary

78. risks

79. draining

80. to

第四篇： Error Correction Changes in the way people live bring about changes in the

jobs that they do. More and more people live in towns and cities

instead on farms and in villages. Cities and states have to provide --71.

services city people want， such like more police protection， more --72.

hospitals， and more schools. This means that more policemen，

more nurses and technicians， and more teachers must be hired.

Advances in technology has also changed people‘s lives. --73.

Dishwashers and washing machines do jobs that were once done

by the hand. The widespread use of such electrical appliances --74.

means that there is a need for servicemen to keep it running --75.

properly.

People are earning higher wages and salaries. This leads --76.

changes in the way of life. As income goes down， people may not --77.

want more food to eat or more clothes to wear. But they may

want more and better care from doctors， dentists and hospitals.

They are likely to travel more and to want more education

Nevertheless， many more jobs are available in these services. --78.

The government also affects the kind of works people do. --79.

The governments of most countries spend huge sums of money

for international defense. They hire thousands of engineers， --80.

scientists， clerks， typists and secretaries to work on the many

different aspects of defense.　

答案：

71.on --- of

72. like --- as

73. has --- have

74. the --- /

75. it --- them

76. leads --- causes

77. down --- up

78. Nevertheless --- Therefore

79. works --- work/job/jobs

80. international --- national