09年6月英语六级考前热点高分范文(一)

Directions: For this part， you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Employment Pressure Facing College Students. You should write at least 150 words， and base your composition on the outline below:

1)目前大学生面临就业难的问题

2)分析导致该问题的原因

3)大学生应该如何应对该问题

Employment Pressure Facing College Students _______________________________________________________________________________

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行文思路

本题属于提纲式文字命题。提纲第1点提出一个问题，提纲第2点要求分析该问题产生的原因，提纲第3的要求说明应该如何解决该问题，由此可判断本文应为问题解决型。

根据所给提纲，本文应包含如下内容：指出大学生就业难的问题;分析导致该问题的原因;从大学生的角度说明应该如何应对该问题。

高分范文

Employment Pressure Facing College Students

About a decade ago， university students could find satisfactory and enviable jobs after their graduation. But now， things are different. Today’s university students usually experience great difficulties finding satisfactory jobs. They often complain that graduation means joblessness. What is the cause of this phenomenon?

Firstly， with the enrollment extension of universities， the supply of university graduates exceeds social demand. This results in a decreased chance for any individual graduate to find a job. Secondly， university students tend to spend most of their time at school in studying academic subjects and lack relevant job experience. Thirdly， some students don’t study hard during the college. After four years of university life， they haven’t gained the knowledge those fairly good jobs or positions require.

Facing the increasingly fierce competition， we university students should try our bests to change this situation. Above all， when in school， we should make the most of our time and put our heart into our studies. What’s more， we can take part-time jobs and attend social activities in our spare time to accumulate relevant practical experience. Besides， when we apply for jobs after graduation， we should attach more importance to accumulating experience than to the starting salary.

【亮点点评】

过去和现在进行对比。

设问句引出原因，容易引起注意。

过渡衔接词语，使文章条理清晰、衔接紧密。

“大学生供过于求”。

“倾向，趋于”。

“面对日趋激烈的竞争”，现在分词作状语。

“用心”。

“积累相关的实际经验”。

“更加关注”。

佳句临摹

1.佳句：Facing the increasingly fierce competition， university students should try their best to change this situation.

临摹：经历过艰苦，我们就会更懂得如何应对危机。

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2.佳句：They should attach more importance to accumulating experience than to their starting salary

临摹：很显然，我们应该更加关注一个人的能力，而不是他的学历。

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【KEY】

1. Having experienced hardships， we will know better how to survive crisis.

2. Obviously， we should attach more importance to one’s abilities than to his degree.